You do the unexpected things..
You touch me when I am least aware…
And see what you do to me…
You take me by surprise…
And I get the first prize…
To be the luckiest gal in town…
Boy...by the way that u size..
Your eyes speak that u’ve fantasised…
This moment a hundred times…
The first gentle kiss on my forehead…
As we moved up the escalator…
Sent shivers down my spine…
Had I ever known something so unreal
The magnetic chemistry that our bodies share
Soon came the unpredicted second…
The elevator got me lucky by chance..
As ur lips touched mine…
For the first time…
I felt the world spin…
and electricity paralysed my thoughts…
It was better than I had imagined in my head..
and I didn't stop for a second..before I myself wanted a lead…
because I wasn’t paying any heed…
And you pulled bak…and I gasped in disbelief
for a moment I forgot…
the mystic chivalry that my boy is!
You are different and you do different things
That kiss was a blissful delight…
Embedded in my soul forever…
Something I thought of day and night…
And this time…when we came around…
Bodies were helplessly drawn…
Touching and teasing without intended purpose….
Sparks…in all directions…flew
People could sense it and they could see…
How helplessly I was drawn to you..
I brush them as jealous…
because I am the luckiest gal in town...
Who belongs to nobody but you..
Your winks and the smile…
Captivate my heart…and make me yours..
Make me breathless…and desperate for you…
You ask me to wait…when you already got me high…
By the touch I felt…and the gaze u froze at me…
Just when I am close to losing all my senses…
You hold my hand in yours…
your warmth fills my being..
and you handle me best…
bring me bak to normality…
instill in me some sense..
the smartest girl otherwise..
is here surrendered to your being
the charismatic charms…
you leave me loving you even more…
with every breath of my life..
see... what you do to me!
10 comments:
:-) amazing way to showcase the beautiful moments of life...the one which were experienced with loads of unpredicted feelings. This poetry reminds me of the goose bumps and the butterfly feelings...which were amazing when i felt them for the first time.
Stay blessed and keep up the good work. Cheers :-)
omg gal dat waz awesome....i can imagine everythin.....grt job keep it up..
nikita dats ausome omg if at all i wud have read it abt 6 months bfr i wud have been in a much better state to respond...as for now its touching
i dun think m in ne position to comment...u r jus terrific...jus so romantic...keep it goin...luv ya...
amazing description
truly amazing! your best work till date.....
loved it gal.....love you!
although the events of life touch people the same way; few can sense the way you sense things!
@jas:thanks a tonn baby!!!
mission's accomplished...!!wen i see that u've liked wht i write... :)
u're the reason...i m soooo...in love...u truly hav given me the most b'ful moments any girl wud have dreamt of...
always..have..n always will...
love u too baby...!!!
Some seek lust , some seek love....
Yeah i know i do scary writing sometimes but its something that came first on my mind when i first read it.
You just made a memorable moment more than beautiful......lets say you made it fascinating.
A very very impressive one....keep up the work.
:)
gal!!!it ws simply amazn...surely d best 1 till nw!!i cud actually imagine the whole scene...2 gud!!
I LOVE That , Great collection
Interesting.
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