Saturday, September 5, 2009

MISSING YOU



I wake up to you everyday

I lay and weep beside my pillow

And you’re gone…

I want you back in my life…

Cos I am missing you…


You’ve gone a place too distant from me..

Yet you are so close..

I want you back in my life

Cos I am missing you…


I miss the laughter,the fun we shared

Now there is a steady strain in our heads

How you nurtured me and how u cared

And now I feel I am all by myself…

vulnerable, facing the wrath of the world

I want you back in my life

Cos I am missing you…


I am a part of you…and will always be

Why are you doing this to us..

Pulling and pushing me down…

Its not you and me…

And you can’t change us

I want you back in my life

Cos I am missing you…


I want you back

I can’t take no more..

I am addicted to your love…

Baby come back to me…

Love me and heal me now…

Cos I am wounded in a way like never before…

I need you now like I never did…

I want you back in my life

Cos I am missing you…

9 comments:

Yuvvraaj said...

omg..
awesome poem..
i can feel the pain in u fr sm1..
neways awesome another creation..
keep going..
still bohot dur jana hai...

Unknown said...

hey nice work gal...i luv its deepness....:)

Unknown said...

lolzzzzzzzz....
i feel like dat person is me....
lol...
nyways.. jokes apart.. d poem is really gud..
m didn't knw ki meri rumate itni talentd h..
gud yaar.. keep writing abt me.. thankz a lot..
:P

nishthaksha said...

The poem
hmm..
U know wat this poem makes me feel as if Bella has written it for Edward.
I think u had this in ur mind too.
Seriously its really touchy touchy!

n!k!t@ said...

welll..bella is me in a lot of ways...and ya it has been written for my edward...
thanks for the comments...really appreciate them..cheers!! :)

tamy said...

hmmm,,,,another great piece of writing!!
already waitin fr ur next poem...

Anonymous said...

magnificient......loved it!

all i can say it...."u'll always hear the voices of ur edward in ur head even if he's near you" u juz hav 2 keep hearing

keep writing!!!

Unknown said...

awesum poem gal.... gave me shivers while i was goin thru it......... very touchy..... ur edward's really luky 2 hv u.... keep up d gud wrk gal...:)

Saptarshi said...

Smashing poem, for real. And, as I said before, you're one of the best rookies in town! Keep 'em coming!